A Loser In Love?

A loser in love,


Has nowhere to go.


Never been in love,


Don't know how to love.


How much can she pay,


For the courage she lacks?


How much does it cost,


To give up her pride?





Listening to love songs,


Is like a daily chores.


Heard it, sing it,


But still, no reward.


Longing, yearning, waiting,


For the one true love to come.


Staring, Standing, Stoning,


Like an idiot in the crowd.





Teach her people, teach her now.


Not to be afraid of love and how.


Tell her, guide her, be patience with her,


For all she does is being nervous.


She needs to be relax and learn to be calm,


But her mind and heart just refuse to show how.


She wants love and yearns to be loved,


But still remains a loser in love.

A Loser In Love?
Listening to love songs,


Is like a daily chores.


Heard it, sing it,


But still, no reward.


Longing, yearning, waiting,


For the one true love to come.


Staring, Standing, Stoning,


Like an idiot in the crowd.





haha, Is this your frustration in life...


well, you could always compensate that with the use of your superior poem-making expertise.


Bravo! I'd rate it a five out of five
Reply:wow omg wow this is soo good omg
Reply:Very nice,
Reply:I like it but in the first stanza, you say love to much.


hope i helped.








A loser in love,


Has nowhere to go.


Never wants to be shoved


Doesn't know how to lead


Doesn't know how to pay,


For the courage she lacks.


How much could she take,


To give up her pride?





But other than the original stanza i like it a lot.








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Reply:That's a very nice poem about a young girl waiting for love.
Reply:Very nice. I think that this could relate to may things, even if it was meant to relate to one. That's the beauty of peotry - it can relate to everything.
Reply:beautiful
Reply:Great.
Reply:i think it is a very good poem and it sounds like a typical young girl


there is some grammar that you might want to fix though
Reply:Lovely. You are a Poet and Don't Know it. There are No loosers or Winners in LOVE. Love is a Gift and you either have it or you don't. If you do not Love Yourself, you have nothing to give! LOVE IS!!!!
Reply:cute :) i like it
Reply:Yes it is a nice poem
Reply:there is no losser when it comes to love.its just that we dont give important when love comes to us
Reply:that is so preety are u going to bea poetry person


when u growup.♥!!
Reply:I think it is a very nice poem.