Saturday, November 19, 2011

What do you think of this love poem?

Who are you to jump inside and proclaim


A meaning for which none have ever known?


We all know not for what or who to blame,


And you stood forth to take an empty thrown.





Love is the opposite of hate to some,


Such that love cannot bear to be apart.


People think that love has not far to come,


And love is always needed for the heart.





If love was traveling down a river


And came to a long, great white waterfall,


Love would not fly, jump, or at all shiver.


Love would just love, and share its love with all.





When love is in us, in all of us, all


Would love and be loved by everyone.


In and instant we start to feel the fall,


And by the hands of love we’d all be done.





How we judge, by attachment and feeling,


In truth we know not with which we’re dealing.





It's a shakepsearian sonnet, opinion and critique, please. could you rate it from 1-10?

What do you think of this love poem?
love the rhyming! to me its not a poem without rhymes! Did you write this? Its really good! 9+!!
Reply:10 love it

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