True Love?

True Love is you accepting my children as your own


True Love is waking in the middle of the night, to walk our youngest son back to his bed after a nightmare


True Love is you telling our daughter how proud you are of her accomplishment, even though its not the degree we thought she should pursue


True Love is watching you play one on one with our oldest son, making certain he is prepared for the high school team





True Love





As I am guided through another day


I listen to my heart and pray


I pray that you remain strong and glee


Until my love brings you back to me


I pray that you handle my heart with care


For only the insincere have ever dwelled there


I pray that you follow the voice of my heart


Hear the mingling of two souls that will never part


I pray we are together once again


Finally sharing true love...now let us begin

True Love?
Pretty good poem, needs a little work. glee doesn't sound right to me.For only the insincere have ever dwelled there...Take out For and Ever. I hope the top is just your opinion of what true love is because if you try to add that to your poem, it sounds like a statement. The bottom stanza is good except for the couple of changes I made. My next poem will be out (published) in the fall of this year.
Reply:Really liked it, ill have 2 read again after a Cup of T
Reply:all that is nice but, true love is unconditional.